Underground Poetry: If You Like Gadgets
65a funny little man
clever little gadgets
an aficionado,
up to date in worldly things.
He bought gadgets;
lots and lots of gadgets.
Things that,
he just could not,
pass up, or live without.
Astounding gadgets- clever little gadgets,
that beeped and reminded;
recorded things.
Ones that dried things,
shaved- opened- sorted,
dated- sealed;
purified his water things.
Food gadgets
that,
cooked- diced- peeled,
and sliced things,
even a labor free gadget,
for hands off,
making bread things.
Funny thing,
about the man;
he was afraid of gadgets...
So he owned them,
by the bushel. gg.zaino Page 12/11/2012
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You are the first Alastar! :)
I truly appreciate your critiques.
We connect brother... in an existential kind of way- ha!
hope the comment wasn't lost- been a while since i've had the pleasure to do so.
keep the colors flying Reb-
peace brother
greg
Hello Greg: You seem to have written an epigram here with an ending infused by your wry wit. You also made me think of the animated Inspector Gadget. Great read.
Hey Sligobay:
Thanx for the drop in and time spent.
True, an epigram of sorts.
Humor is a vehicle i try to use often.
smile and think!
:)
will drop by soon Sligo
... Here's to gadgets and those who possess them-
Cheers my friend!
peace- greg
Aye Amigo, and another, don't reckon my mind clicks like this, the stuff it clicks on, between titties and beer, rise up when I'm smokin' neither allowed 'round here,
go finger?
cumo usted frijoles? (how you bean?)
dust
Hell Dusty- you had a field day reading thru my grey matter and how it operates!
I wonder how i would digest what you just polished off here???? thanx for all this time you put in Amigo- truly appreciated.
Aye Brother- the day's a comin'!
We're making plans on heading ur way come August after all. decided on not making the Green Mountains, but instead, cross country it seems to be.
not exactly sure how we're gonna set this up, but i have two friends in New Mexico- one in Albuquerque- the other in Los Alamos- and of course yourself.
is there a hotel/motel close by?
Trying to figure on how to deal with the hound too... makes it a bit more difficult, but i wouldn't pass up the chance to greet ya face to face and shake your hand-
kick me a kite in email and give me your take on it.
maybe a route to take that makes sense etc.
Keeping fingers crossed and trying not to piss off the Gods until the journey comes to an end- i see a great story evolving in all this!!!
Peace Dusty- Be cool Bro
ur amigo greg :]-~~
Alastar Packer Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago
Ha ha your wicked good Greg! Gadgets galore in this existentialist like poem. You've got a singular take on stuff that's second to none my man.Ps- saw your great comment but not sure it'll even show up with the glitch so we'll see in the morn.